Wednesday, May 4, 2011

Can I???

I couldnt think
Thoughts struck me,
My mind fell on objects
Then i could see.

I realised i cant relaise
Realisation came
I didnt know this world
Was such a deadly game!

O! Mother, crazy You are
I say,
O! Do I?
I mean, wherefrom the thought came?

I solved a sum others couldnt
Teacher praised me,
I didnt know why, for i couldnt find
Wherefrom the solution came?

I said a joke, people laughed
One said, only you can think that way
I heard a whisper, can u, ever?
And would u ever dare to say?

Poetry u write very well
A friend told me
Have a secret to share today
I really dont, infact i cant,
The lines strike,so i say...
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9 comments:

  1. AnirvanMay 4, 2011 at 3:57 AM

    nabbah! ki realistik poem!!

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  2. swahaMay 4, 2011 at 4:03 AM

    hehe thank u...

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  3. AnonymousMay 4, 2011 at 10:25 PM

    "A poem strait from heart" -- Good keep it up !!!

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  4. swahaMay 5, 2011 at 2:48 AM

    thanks...

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  5. paramitaMay 5, 2011 at 6:54 AM

    superb didi

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  6. swahaMay 5, 2011 at 10:35 AM

    @paramita- being a science student i admit it that the poem is true...

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  7. Amal GuptaMay 5, 2011 at 10:46 AM

    // I really dont, infact i cant,
    The lines strike,so i say... //

    Profound!!! You're not the first....many creative minds - poets, writers, sculptures, artists, and composers have admitted that whatever they created came from the Divine.

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  8. swahaMay 6, 2011 at 12:40 AM

    yes true, but i said it being a science student- 1.i cant think, thoughts strike 2. i cant understand & i dont know how to understand , 3. i cant realise, realisation comes from within...

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  9. SANDIPANJune 26, 2011 at 11:07 AM

    "हरि ॐ तत् सत " . . . "Thou art That"

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